No, I don’t think searching for arbor is more meaningful. I just was struck by the fact that changing a couple of words results in a new poem. In my own haiku, I will occasionally publish two haiku together: both alike except for a couple of words. No criticism of your work was intended.
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You think searching for arbor more meaningful? My intent was searching for passion/fervor. I’m always open to suggestions. 🙂
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No, I don’t think searching for arbor is more meaningful. I just was struck by the fact that changing a couple of words results in a new poem. In my own haiku, I will occasionally publish two haiku together: both alike except for a couple of words. No criticism of your work was intended.
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I understand and I like your idea! 🙂
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Thank you so much. I was worried I had offended you.
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Oh, no! You didn’t offend me at all. 😉
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Thank you for writing this note.
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